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Old 08-17-2005, 11:37 AM
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seeing as you people are bloodthirsty hooligans, I guess I can use a format for making a nice bloody story, so I'll give it a shot...

Dark Wind:The Return To The Other World

CHAPTER 1

It was the usual time again, 11:00pm as Lu walked in, as usual, Everyone saying their Hello's to her and looking around the room, At each other, Before returning to their games, It was rather silent as I looked about the room, Knowing who these people were, and feeling at ease as i just Idled in my corner as I usually did, When as usual, As I suspected, Brain began throwing paper balls at me, As he usually did, It was the one of the things you could always count on seeing during the time you spent here. Although, I still recall what happened 2 years ago, I recall being killed by my friends, losing, The suffering, the Pain, I remember it all, Although, The only thing I can't remember is the whole reason for us being there. It was Unnatural, Bizarre some might say, even to this day, it still Lingers in my mind, Lying dormant, As if something, Or someone were trying to burst out of my head, I keep getting visions, and Memories flicking through my mind of the incident. Seeing a sword go through your stomach over and over again, Every day gets you down sometimes, Because I'm not too keen on the sight of blood, Heck, I find it funny when i cut myself with a knife or something and I just stare at the cut whilst it bleeds, But when you have a giant wound like that, with Blood all over you, it certainly is no laughing matter.
I had decided I wanted to try and get back to the other world, i had a feeling I was forgetting something, Something, Or someone, I just...just couldn't remember. But I had to go back, Just to make sure, I tried talking to everyone, not even andrew to send me back, That and the fact no-one would let me go on my own, They refused to let me die a second time, This time i was more aware of the dangers, and i wasn't going to let myself get killed so easily this time. I tried talking to Alvaro, The only person I knew that should be able to help me return to that world, I asked him to check "The History Of DarkWind" book tha he found before the incident, but the only information we found out that the other world, Was infact created by our minds, so in other words, It was a world created by Dark Wind, this was the Dark Wind world, Or Planet, whichever you want to call it, Giving me more reason to return, I asked Andrew to send me back there, but he refused me many times, he made a vow over a year ago never to use Magic, except for healing purposes. I sat in my room as I tried to think of a way to get back, I wanted this so badly, As I got up and headed out of my room and heard the snoring in the hallways as a shouted
"Alliance! Shut it, Will ya!"
Alliance awoke, and fell off the beam he was leaning on, and landed to the floor with a thud, Jumping up he rubbed his face in pain as I looked at him.
"Yes Jay, what can i do for ya?" he asked me
"I just wanted you to sip the snoring up,It freaks me out" I replied to him
"I know you wanna get back to that other world, its the talk of the place at the moment" He told me
I rubbed the back of my head in a bit of embarresment
"hehe, Umm...Yeah" I told him
"If there is anything I can do, let me know, i'm always there for ya" he said as he returned to the beams and began snoozing again.
I sat out in the conservatory, watching the ducks dissapearing one by one, It reminded me of the time in the other world, When we each got lost, One by one, Then it occured to me, I had to go back, Because in theory, WE should still be there, If its a world created by us, There should be exact copies of us...In other words, The Shadows that we encountered whilst there, They are not shadows however, I thought, they are exact replicas of us, Just in a different world, But they have the mind of Children, From the moment, we though them up, They actually existed, But what we didnt know, The DW manor burned down back then, because everyone else's shadows became real, And a war was technically unleashed there, but we were out of harms way, Or so we thought. I knew what had to be done, I needed to go back, and take this world out, I needed to rid our normal world, Of the "Dark Wind" world, but the only way I could do that, would be to go back in time, Back to the moment we were sent into that world. I stood up and headed for my room, As tomorrow, I would find out how to make it back...
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Old 08-17-2005, 02:12 PM
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very dramatic indeed i must say it is alot better than the last
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Old 08-17-2005, 03:26 PM
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yeh, Bubbles is teh uber evilness
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alvaro's back o.o i might be......

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CHAPTER 2

I began tossing and turning that night, I could hardly sleep, Once again i was plagued by these same nightmares I had 2 years ago, The same nightmares that haunted me over that period of time, They still haunt me, As I got up out of my bed, I put my head in my hands and wiped the sweat from my face and forehead as I looked around my room, Whilst it was still dark, so i could barely see anything as I made my way towards the light switch, Flicking it on, I saw someone else in the room, Somone in a cloak,
"W..Who are you!" I said looking in his or her direction
"I can help you get back to the other world, but I cannot let you go alone, I can send you back to that night when you dissapeared, So that there will be 2 of you in existance, Remember however, Once I send you back to that time, You cannot come back, Meaning that there will always be two of you for as long as you both shall live, Is this what you want?"
"Yes, More than anything, I have to go back, and set things right"
"Very well then, Prepare yourself, So long Jay, By doing this you will no longer be able to come back to this time, You will be living 2 years before this time, And you will cease to exist here, Goodbye...Jay" the person said taking off their hood, It was Lucrecia
"Lu? What the hell?" I said as i looked at my feet, they were dissapearing...and slowly working its way up, I looked at my hands they began dissapearing too
"We'll miss you Jay"
So much thoughts ran through my head, part of me wishing i could decline this offer now, I wanted to tell her I wanted to stay, But I knew what my purpose was, I had to set things right then, Change the past to alter the fate of the future, I kept saying these words as I was technically being erased from existance
"Seeya Lu, Tell everyone I said bye will ya, Make it a good friends last request"
"I will, Be careful, And if you ever find a way, come back to us"
"I'll try" I said as I looked at myself and nothing was there, then finally my head dissapeared, I was on my way, back in time, To the other world.
I woke up, In what seemed to be my room from 2 years ago, everything in the exact same places as I remembered them, I looked at everything, then ventured out to see if everyone and everything was the same. I scoured the beams looking for Alliance, But to no luck, I headed for the Dark Wind lobby, Hoping taht I would be able to find someone, I hesitated at opening the door at first, But i turned the door handle, and pushed the door a little, Being a little scared i decided that kicking it was the best option, so i let go of the handle and kicked the door wide open, To find everyone lying on the floor, and I saw myself...sitting in te corner. As I expected , I saw no Brain, But i knew this. I stood there and thoguht to myself, I had finally come back to this world, my memory of the two years since this incident began, All safely tucked away in my head, I made sure I would never forget them, For however long I lived, At this point however, I didn't know what to do, or where to go, so I just headed back to 'my' room, And began to fall asleep on the bed, Before finally falling asleep. That night i had memories of the things that had happened over the 2 years. I woke up taht morning, and I was just about to head out of the room , When the door opened and i was smacked in the face
"Watch what ya doing you idiot" I said as the door closed, and in front of me, I saw myself, 2 years younger than I am now.
"What the? What kind of sick joke is this? Who the hell are you?" Jay said to me
"I'm you, 2 years from now, You survived...I mean, I survived the whole incident thats about to occur, The killing, The colloseum, I remember it all"
Me and Jay sat down and began talking, I was telling him how he actually got killed, and the whole series of events during this other world experience, then told him how i had lived the life during those 2 years, how they were nothing but memories to me now. I remember him telling me that he had been getting visions of this incident happening. The same visions I had when i was there...
I told him the whole reason I was here, And what I had to do, He understood me pretty well, as he only had to ask Lumi if it was okay to take me along on the journey of exploring the outside world, whilst he did that, I went venturing and seeing people I, Unfortunately I was 20 at this time, and Looked a little different than I did back then, So some were pretty shocked when they saw me, But I explained who I ws and where I came from, which eased their minds a little.
Lumi stood at the doors once again. I kept getting the thoughts of what was going to happen, I knew what was going to Happen as the doors opened, This time I was prepared. I told them to head to the waterfall,10 miles away from here. I stayed behind because I knew what was to become of this manor. I sat outside on the front steps, waiting...watching for teh right moment, Knowing hell was going to break loose here any minute, or whilst my back was turned...so I just sat there, The cold wasteland winds, Blowing against my face and hair, I brushed my hair back and put my head in my hands as I began to remember this whole incident, And slowly, I began drifiting off to sleep...
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Old 08-18-2005, 05:39 PM
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lets go back in time!!!!

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Chapter 3

I awoke sometime later, And just as I thought when i woke up, The place had burned down behind my back, It was a horrible sight, The place was burned down to ashes, Everything Iin ruins, Bodies scattered everywhere, I stood there and thought to my self

But, It burned down, I remember Wakka and Midnight telling us it had burned down and everyone was alive and safe, all I see here are bones and ashes, this is horrible...

I could have saved everyone, IF i didn't fall asleep, I could never forgive myself, As history was already changing, I saw the dead, Unable to identify any of them as it wasn't my field of work, Just bones and skeletons, only possesions remained, I seached around the place, some Flames still blowing, almost 'Dancing' in the wind as it was a cold, bitter wind, which sent a chill down my spine as I searched the ruins for anything that might help, But to my disadvantage, I found nothing. I decided to catch up with everyone else, And began a slow walk in the direction of the waterfall, and lake. All of a sudden the winds died, And the scorching hot sunbegan burning brighter than it previously had, I thought to myself as I walked, what if i wasn't meant to change the past? I knew I shouldn't have come back, but it was for the benefit of the future, And for this other world. i had been walking for what seemed like many days, Before finally collapsing on the floor due to exhaustion, I could barely move, I tried to get back up but to no success. I ended up on my back, staring at the cloudless sky, Watching Vultures flying overhead. I knew this was the end, I wasn't supposed to be here, And this was my punishment.

Get up

"huh?" I said, barely making a sound

C'mon Jay, Get up!
Yeah, You would never give up, Now get up Gumbo

i recognized those voices, I tried to get up, I struggled, but got there and I opened my eyes, And saw Boko and Typo in front of me, They began telling me
how they were just a few of the handful of people that fought of the shadows, and survived, But retreated at the size of the army. I were just glad someone survived because of my Laziness, I asked em what they were gonna do, and they claimed to have created a camp 2 miles west of the waterfall. I promised we would all return there after I stopped Yojimbo and Andrew first. I walked with them to the waterfall, and we parted ways as I decided to stop for a while. I built up the energy and ran to the colloseum, I made it just in time I think, but stood there as I saw Andrew on the outside banging in the walls in confusion, But wasn't Andrew behind all this? I stood there and watched him, he began walking round the colloseum, I decided to follow him. there was a secret entrance in the side of the colloseum, and he pushed a brick in, and the small door opened. he entered it, I was standing round teh corner, and the door closed when i got close, so I began seraching for the brick, not realising taht it was cleverly placed near the ground, but found it and walked through the door. inside i had ended up in a dark corridor, I could hear the occasional dripping sounds, and I could see countless spider webs on the ceiling and torches, All lit, lining the corridor, At this point i was pretty scared as I didn't see this first time round, But i pressed furtehr onwards hoping to find more answers...
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Old 08-21-2005, 01:31 PM
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Intense...
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On a side note, I would like to apologize for the shortness, and the typos of Chapter 3, I was at a party, and did this about 1 hour after waking up the morning after, so not much thought was put into it, my head still hurts to be honest XD
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